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« on: May 11, 2013, 11:03:54 am »

New characters to RP as, so I'm actively looking for feedback on how they were handled and what you think of them thus far. They are Jimmy Colt and Ricky King, the Fantastic and Transcendent Wildcards, and their servant/manager Boris the Butler.

From Legacy, they had three non-match segments which I wouldn't mind you taking a look at and letting me know what you think.

#1: http://wwg.smfforfree3.com/index.php/topic,15148.msg128875.html#msg128875
#2: http://wwg.smfforfree3.com/index.php/topic,15148.msg128877.html#msg128877
#3 (what actually counted as my RP this week): http://wwg.smfforfree3.com/index.php/topic,15148.msg128881.html#msg128881

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« Reply #1 on: May 12, 2013, 08:40:43 am »

Cause everyone else seems to be haters ill drop some feedback. As a debut tp id give it about an 8. Not saying you'd get that everyweek but as a debut rp its worth that. I did like the interaction between the two and boris. The lollipop guild squad was an interesting dimension to say the least.

No doubt there a comical duo and they're 'higher impact hardy boyz' style of wrestling works well. It shows the real contrast through personality and wrestling. They know they're good, just need to be more serious and will go far. Still it was a good roleplay to introduce the two pranksteres and a nice way to show their prank antics throughout the show.

On a side note I do like how you added an additional detailed summary of their in ring styles. Should help match writers when writing matches for them. Interested in seeing where they go from here
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« Reply #2 on: May 12, 2013, 09:11:06 am »

I thought it was an excellent debut for sure.  I don't think I can give it a rating becuase I'd be rating it against your other work and I don't want to do that.  I'll wait and see what you do this week and it'll give a better outlook on what I believe your rp quality is. 

This was definately a different feel from most of your other characters, and I like.  It's a nice contrast to what is going in the WWG right.  A nice, young, upstart tag team duo, that combine comedy, cockiness, and actually ability, makes me wish I had came up with it myself. 

Great character background and development on all characters.  I can't wait to see where this goes from here.
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« Reply #3 on: May 13, 2013, 10:36:26 pm »

Cheers, glad to hear you're liking them so far. I don't really have many long term plans for either of them, or the team itself, so it's just going to be a matter of seeing where it goes. For now, I'm just looking at getting them settled in over the next few weeks. No one is safe from backstage antics and shenanigans! Maybe something along that lines will be enough to get a feud started.
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