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October 22, 2018, 09:47:51 am Moonchild says: Ultimate Online Wrestling

To anyone who is interested…


Ultimate Online Wrestling is currently looking to expand its roster this year for Season 2 of our heavily story driven E-Fed that sort of reads and feels like a comic book. We’ve been open for 14 months and have posted 12 well written shows on the SteemIt platform. We have over 1600 followers on there and we use the platform to make a little money from the hobby that we love. We are a laid back E-Fed for adults and we only do about 1 show a month. There is a 2 Role Play limit per show with no word limit on individual role plays.


We are a unique E-Fed in that I reward my role player’s with the Crypto-Currency XP Coin which can be converted into Bitcoin on online exchanges. We also write and do our shows in a way that concentrates on an actual audience that reads our work on the SteemIt community network. So our work isn’t just consumed by people involved in the E-Fed, but also fans of our work on SteemIt and Twitter.


If you’re interested joining our roster and learning how we do things at Ultimate Wrestling you can join our discord channel link below. Our roster and staff are very friendly and willing to answer any questions you might have.


Discord Channel: r/https://discord.gg/mj6Msrf


Below are some of our shows so that you can get a feel for my writing style and our story-lines.


https://steemit.com/fiction/@ultimatewrestlin/ultimate-online-wrestling-ch-4-friday-night-clash-episode-1


https://steemit.com/fiction/@ultimatewrestlin/ultimate-online-wrestling-ch-8-ultra-slam-pay-per-view-event


https://steemit.com/fiction/@ultimatewrestlin/ultimate-online-wrestling-ch-11-friday-night-clash-7
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« on: January 02, 2015, 07:58:25 pm »

I would love some feedback on my latest role play good or bad, What could i improve on, What have I improved on since my previous role plays.

Thanks in advance Chris.




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« Reply #1 on: October 27, 2015, 02:11:53 pm »

The thing I've noticed about your roleplays recently is they seemed rushed. I know that's because your on limited time. Hopefully in the future your time gets more and you don't have to rish them as much.

Overall you've still improved a lot since your early days here. I see you improving more yet, hopefully youre time off lets you refresh.
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« Reply #2 on: October 27, 2015, 02:29:38 pm »

I agree with Brad - in trying to thicken the roster, I think you spread yourself thin.

When you return... maybe just consider keeping it to one or two characters.  I mean even I bench Odinsson when I don't have a clear purpose for him.  There's no shame in trading out quantity for quality.  No ****, bro... at one of our recent events - the sum total of writing you did for all your booked characters was greater than the amount done by Both competitors in that night's main event.  I'm not going to quote who's and when's - but I promise you that is a true happening.  So by all means, take your time... but know that when you come back to action we'll be happy to have you even if it at a loss of a few sideline characters.  Everyone knows you have busted ass to produce work reliably as possible for WWG, and I'm sure I am not alone in saying; I appreciate it.

We are all, all aware you're a good sport and an avid player.  We know what it's like for Work to come first, but I can tell you if/when you are ready for a triumphant return, as long as You are back no one is really going to be let down if a few of your side characters aren't.

We're going to miss you when you go off-card, but I think it's fair to say Trotted, Chris and others among your characters (at their most Face) were underdogs we all quietly rooted for.  As a handler you've literally done nothing - except improve constantly.  You are miles ahead of the guy I met whose work I had to guess words in every other sentence.  Your storytelling is impressive too.... the sheer fact you DO juggle so many characters is impressive enough, but you do so rather well.  Sometimes idk wtf I'm even doing with Wretch next week lol.

You are a reliable handler, and all of us know how tight time can be when real life takes priority.  I think most of us knew the workload was going to become too much and we all, all have ebbs and flows in our personal schedules.  I for one have taken time off, I think almost all of us have.... but you are going to be missed in character and I do hope you show up on the boards still.

I can't wait to see how Trotter, Conrad or Chris are in their returns to the ring.
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« Reply #3 on: October 27, 2015, 05:09:56 pm »

I just realised this was old as ****, but ohwell. haha.
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